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Karmic Balance
This is an old old story I wrote years ago under a different pen name. Then someone had reposted it acting as the author so I didn't do much with it or any writing at all for a long time up until several months ago. It got a lot of positive feedback from readers on deviant art so I thought I'd share it with all of you here. After reading it again I see some early traces of Chronicles of Danny so I hope you all don't mind a little repetitiveness. Just giving you a little something while you wait for other fanfic chapters etc.
Karmic Balance Chapter 1 My name is Zeke, well not really it’s actually something that cannot be pronounced in English so Zeke will have to do. I am a demon and council member of the eighth sphere. There’s also Abbadon , Pan the swift, Mammon the unseen, and a bunch of others who all have some special duty in hell. What do I do? Well I am a Time Demon, basically I control how fast time travels in hell. Sometimes I decide to make years go by like minutes and sometimes I like to stretch seconds out for a century, depends on what the big L wants me to do really. It was an okay job but I was getting a little bored and was up for a change in duties. Finally I decided to go up the office of my supervisor, Minos to see if there was anything else I could do. When you go to hell, your fate is decided by this guy. He is responsible for punishment traffic, paychecks, the schedule and in my case, job duties. I knocked on the door and I heard his voice say, “Come in”. I opened the door and there my boss was sitting back in his leather seat smoking a cigar. “Ah Zeke, come in what can I do for you?” he asked me with a smile. “Well I know your busy Minos so I’ll keep it short,” I said, “I’m getting a little stir crazy being down here in the eighth sphere just controlling time.” Minos’ smile quickly faded and he sat up right in his seat, giving me his full attention. “What do you want me to have you do instead? Push boulders up a hill? Whip people?” I could tell he wasn’t too happy with me. “No, but there’s gotta be something else I can do. At least somewhere else. I’ve been down here in the eighth sphere for over two thousand years. I’m not asking for a raise I’m just asking for a change of scenery.” Minos sat back in his chair again and smoked on his cigar. Then his eyes widened and he leaned forward again with a look of excitement in his eyes. “I know, how would you like to be working with the Karma department?” The what? “Karma department sir?” “Yeah, we take part in the negative side of Karma didn’t you know?” “I thought we didn’t believe in Karma sir.” “Well, Karma is just the name we gave it. Really, it’s just a fancy way of keeping a balance of making sure bad people that are still living are being kept in check, sort of a way to give them a second chance by humbling them. It’s called Karma because that’s what humans call it because they don’t see any of us doing anything. Are you interested?” To be honest, this sounded a little weird to me. The whole time I’ve been here I never heard of a Karma department and if I did join, what were they going to have a Time Demon do? What were they going to have me speed up time and make bad people late for their jobs? “Uh, Minos, I’m a Time Demon, what use do you guys have for me in the Karma department?” Minos shrugged and rested his feet on his desk, showing no concern for me at all. “I don’t know, you’ve been working in the eighth sphere for two thousand years, you’ve had to have picked up a few tricks. Look, all you are doing is knocking people down off of their high horses so they don’t get cocky.” Seemed like an okay plan. “Okay, I’ll do it. But how do I know which people to get?” Minos opened up his desk drawer and started filing through his papers. Quickly, he pulled out a white sheet of paper and quickly read it through before handing it to me. “This is the file on Cleary University in Philadelphia. It’s a pretty prestigious college for business students, law students, you know, a place to make powerful people who usually end up in our hands when they die. Anyway, being that it’s a University, a lot of the girls that go there get a bit too confident after they’ve been accepted. On that paper is a list of specific girls that need to be taken care of.” I looked at the list, it wasn’t too long but for my first time it seemed like a lot. “So what do you want me to do to them? Run em over with a car, push them down the stairs.” “No you idiot nothing like that.” Minos said getting frustrated, “Just humble them so they lose their cockiness. That’s all. Now get outta here and get to work.” Before I could say anything else, a strong wind pushed me out of the room and the door to Minos’ office swung shut. I took the gate to Philadelphia and was transported just outside of the campus grounds. I walked over to the parking lot and looked at myself in the window of a car. I was a man in his late twenties with a ponytail, wearing a brown plaid suit, god hell needed to do some research on style because even I knew this was ridiculous. I looked down at the list and read the first name. Name: SARAH FROST Offense: Losing her temper at mock trials and making one of the opposing team members cry. Has no remorse at all and is heavily convinced that she’s right about her issues. The photo was of a cute girl for someone who seemed like she deserved to be on the third sphere of hell. She had long blonde hair, a nice tone body and some decent sized breasts. Nothing too huge but she wasn’t a flat board either. She was also a lot taller than the normal girl, which kind of would make me want to date her if it wasn’t for the fact that I wasn’t human. It took me about twenty minutes to find Sarah on campus and really that was by luck because classes were ending so there were tons of students walking to their next class. Sarah was walking along the park, not talking to anyone and without a smile on her face. She looked like she could lose her temper if she didn’t get her way. I decided to stay back behind the pillar of the hallway and waited for Sarah to walk by. Just as she was walking past me I realized, I didn’t know what the hell I was going to do. While I was trying to think of something, Sarah had already walked past me. I quickly tried running after her and as she was walking past a picnic table with a group of girls, one of the girls stood up and stood in Sarah’s way. “You have a lot of nerve, screaming at my partner at mock trial the other day.” The girl said. Sarah’s eyes flared at the girl and she stepped forward in the girls’ face making her step back. “Well I’m sorry if you two dykes want to get married but I think that is sick and that’s what that b*tch gets for saying that I was against gay marriage because I was homophobic!” Geez, she really could lose her temper. She almost had that girl crying. Before the fight escalated into a physical fight, I snapped my fingers and all was quiet because I had stopped time. I walked up to the frozen Sarah to get a closer look at her. She was quite the fancy dresser. She wore this sleeveless v-neck dress shirt that cut pretty low and she wore black dress pants. I figured if this girl thought that being right was the only thing important, I’d make her think twice when I got the idea to tamper with her clothing. I don’t care how right you are in an argument, but if you standing in front of me in your underwear, you’ve lost all status and should crawl into a hole. I grew out the claw of my pointer finger and ran it from top to bottom of Sarah’s shirt exposing a nice white satin bra. Next I cut the fabric of her shirt from her shoulders and then from the sides so when I unfroze time it would fall off. Next I unbuckled her belt and then unzipped the front of her dress pants. The belt was pretty heavy, but Sarah had some nice hips holding those pants up still so I lowered her pants further down so the weight of the belt would pull them the rest of the way down. Satisfied with my karmic balance, I walked back to my original spot and snapped my fingers to resume time. I don’t know what Sarah’s next sentence was because it stopped mid way when her shirt fell off from the front of the back and when her pants dropped down to her ankles exposing her silk white bikini panties. The other girl brought her hand to her mouth in surprise and then started laughing as Sarah stopped and looked down in horror at her exposure. “Wow Sarah, for a snooty b*tch, I expected you to be a thong wearer” she said. Sarah screamed and tried covering her bra and her panties, which isn’t what I would’ve done because that attracted a lot of attention from other people. Everybody around her started gasping in amazement while other people were running up to see what the big fuss was about. Sarah looked around at the growing crowd and tried to run but tripped from the pants around her ankles, as she fell in the air I snapped my fingers and froze time again. I walked up to Sarah and pulled the back of her bra and hooked it around the edge of a picnic table. I figured it couldn’t hurt to take things a step further as I snapped my fingers again. There was a loud ripping sound and now Sarah’s bra was dangling from the corner of the picnic table and Sarah remained on her stomach knowing that she just lost her bra. The guys around me starting hooting and hollering as Sarah put her arm around her chest and slowly got up. The girl she was arguing with was almost in tears from laughter, so was Sarah, but I don’t think she was laughing. Then some guy pushed his way through the crowd and put his varsity jacket around her, I guess it was her boyfriend. Sarah and her boyfriend walked off while the crowd that had formed around her still hooted at her. Not too bad for my first time I thought. I walked away from the crowd and looked at the list again crossing out Sarah’s profile. This was interesting, instead of one girl that was next on the list, it was actually three girls who were bracketed together. Name: MANDY THERON Offense: Captain of the volleyball team. Very competitive and yells at anybody on the team when they mess up. Very sore loser. Name: SANDY WILLIAMS Offense: Another volleyball team member. Hangs out in the locker room and listens for girls who badmouth Mandy and then rats them out causing more trouble. Since she’s a tall girl, she’s also not afraid of intimidating girls either with her size. Name: ANDREA BURNS (I get it, Mandy, Sandy and Andy real cute) Offense: Not on the volleyball team just one of Mandy’s friends. She is friendly to the other girls on the volleyball team but when she’s with the other two, says some pretty nasty things behind there backs. She’s also responsible for spreading rumors about one girl that caused the girl’s boyfriend to break up with her. This was going to be good, three for the price of one. I figured that since two of the girls were on the volleyball team, they’d be at the gym practicing so that’s where I walked. Sure enough, there the three girls were with the other volleyball members. Sandy and Mandy were in these really tight shorts with their t-shirts tied like the other girls. Andy was standing next to Mandy wearing black dress pants and a long sleeve dress shirt. Mandy was standing on the side watching Sandy warm the team up. One of the girls on the other side of the net bumped the ball up to the other side. Sandy watched the ball fly in the air and with great strength in her long legs, jumped up in the air and spiked the ball sending it down so fast that two of the other team members on the other net stepped out of the way. “Guys, you’re not in high school gym class, hit the ball it’s not going to hurt you.” Mandy said. Andy laughed at Mandy’s joke while Sandy shot this evil look to the girls who ducked out of the way as if they were expected to stop the ball. Sandy served the ball to the other team and once again, one of the girls bumped it up and sent it to Sandy’s side. Sandy jumped up in the air with determination to send it flying at another girls' head when I snapped my fingers to put a stop to this. I walked up to the volleyball court to get a closer look at the girls and to decide what I was going to do. I figured stripping them was a nice way of humbling someone so I stuck to that formula. I walked up to Sandy first. She was in mid air so pulling her shorts down was easy. I was amazed at how firm her butt was. Maybe it was because it she was wearing a nice purple thong but man, I had never seen a butt that firm. (I had seen a lot because in hell you’re naked a lot of the time.) I finished up on Sandy and took her shirt off exposing some full C size breasts that were going to be bouncing freely since she had no bra on. Satisfied with Sandy, I decided to turn my attention to Andy and Mandy. I walked up to Mandy first and took off her shirt. She wasn’t wearing a bra either, must have been a sports thing. Her breasts weren’t nearly as full as Sandy’s but they weren’t a bad size. I took her shirt with Sandy’s clothes and then removed Mandy’s shorts. Now, if I had a penis, which demons don’t, I definitely would have crossed my legs at the nice number Mandy wore. She had on a hot pink thong that was tied in the back by a single ring. I was going to have some fun with that. Next I stripped Andy of her clothes and put them in the pile with the others. Man she didn’t have a bra on either, what was with these girls? Andy was wearing something interesting too. She had on a black thong that was held together by two metal buckles along the side of her underwear. I took a moment to look at both Mandy and Andy’s underwear and devised a plan. I unbuckled the sides of Andy’s underwear and ran them through the back of Mandy’s underwear. I didn’t really want to move them from their original position, but this was going to be worth it. Andy was now standing back to back with Mandy, who was still facing the volleyball court. I took the bundle of clothes from the three girls and I threw them behind the bleachers where I remained hidden. Once I was comfortable, I snapped my fingers again and let time resume. Sandy spiked the ball that was in the air but she didn’t send it flying at all because she lost strength in her arm when she felt a breeze hit her body. As Sandy landed to the ground her breasts bounced a little causing the jaws on the girls of the opposite side of the net to drop. Sandy looked down and screamed before covering her chest and crossing her legs. It was kind of funny, with her legs crossed; Sandy was about the same height of the other girls. While Sandy alternated from covering her crotch to her ass, Mandy walked towards Sandy to help her when she stopped as she felt a tug from behind. Andy also felt a tug and tried turning around but every time she did she felt a tug from what felt like her underwear. Both girls looked down and saw that they were in the same state as their friend Sandy and both screamed covering their chests. It was a classic cartoon, wherever Mandy ran, Andy ran in the opposite direction and the elastic from both girls’ underwear pulled them together. This time, Mandy and Andy both planted their feet firmly as they tried to get away stretching out each other’s underwear pretty hard until there was a loud rip that sent both girls forward landing on their faces. Boy I was surprised, Mandy had brown hair but um, her other hair was black. I guess she dyed it then. Having now been fully exposed, Mandy screamed even louder and started running toward the locker room, hand between her legs. Andy followed Mandy close behind with her hands on her chest and Mandy’s underwear dangling from hers. All three girls ran to the locker room to get their dress clothes. At this point, the other girls on the volleyball team were laughing their asses off because this was the first time they had seen the three girls in fear and embarrassment instead of always anger. I slowly followed the group of girls to the locker room. I waited a couple seconds after they all went in so they wouldn’t notice me. When I walked inside, the volleyball team was standing outside of the bathroom stalls and I could see three pairs of crossed legs hidden behind three stalls. “Which one of you did this to us?” Andy shouted from behind the stall. “Whoever took our clothes from our lockers better give them back or you’re off the team!” said Mandy Sandy followed that by saying, “I’m going to kick all of your asses when I get out of here!” Did I mention that I froze time again and took their clothes out of their lockers too? Boy they were all still angry so I figured I needed to humble the three girls some more. I froze time again and opened the stalls. All three girls were still covering themselves, despite being behind the stalls. I tried removing the panties off of Sandy and Andy, but it was damn near impossible since their legs were crossed so I just lengthened my claws and cut them off from the sides. I threw their underwear in the garbage and then I moved the girls into the showers and turned the showers on. I stepped back hidden behind a locker and then resumed time once again. The volleyball team had a look of confusion when they saw that the stalls the girls were hiding behind were open and that no one was there. Then a chorus of three screams attracted their attention to the showers where the three girls were standing naked in the shower. The water hadn’t had any time to warm up and it was freezing cold, causing the Mandy, Sandy and Andy’s nipples to become very erect. The volleyball team started laughing hysterically and some of the girls even pulled out their cell phones and started taking pictures. Once the three girls saw the flashes going off they tried covering themselves again. Sandy and Andy must have thought they still had their underwear because they only covered their chests. They must have felt the water hitting them from below because they looked down and realized they were completely naked like Mandy and freaked out some more. I guess when you’re embarrassed you’re in a state of panic and make decisions you probably wouldn’t make if you were thinking rationally. To try and cover themselves up, Sandy and Andy both placed their hands over Mandy’s body to cover her while she placed one hand over Sandy’s crotch and one hand over Andy’s crotch to cover them. Three girls being in a shower naked together already seemed as if it was something out of a porno movie, but now that they were touching each other, it looked as if the three girls were coming out of the closet. I left the locker room while the volleyball team was still taking pictures, knowing that there is no way those girls would ever treat people like they way they did because I’m pretty sure those pictures would be used as blackmail against them. As I walked out of the locker room I pulled out the list Minos gave me and crossed off the three girls’ names and looked down at the next one. Name: JESSICA FEATHERMAN Offense: This College Senior has been doing theatre all her life at the University. As a freshman she was ignored and was not given any roles for her first two years and was stuck doing costumes and makeup. Jessica was very angry about this and swore she’d never do that to other people. When she finally did start getting roles, her peers told her she was great and that boosted Jessica’s confidence a little too much. Jessica gets all the lead roles now and despite her own experiences, ignores lower classman and coldly gives them harsh critique in their acting skills in workshops. Boy, if this girl didn’t clean up her act, she was going to end up where all the other hypocrites go in hell, which is not a pretty sight at all. I walked over to the theatre of the University knowing that Jessica would be there. I walked inside and saw a sign that said DRESS REHEARSAL PLEASE BE QUIET. I quietly opened the door and slowly crept in hiding behind one of the seats. The play must have been a musical because the orchestra was in the pit and Jessica was onstage singing in an 18th century dress with one of those ridiculous wigs that they used to wear. As the song was going on, I snuck backstage to get closer. To my luck, no one else was backstage. I snapped my fingers and froze time, silencing the music. I walked onstage and realized why no one was backstage, the entire cast and crew was sitting in the audience, obviously waiting for their time to go on, this was good because Jessica would have an audience. I started by unzipping the back of Jessica’s dress and since the thing was so heavy it quickly fell down to Jessica’s feet. Boy, Jessica was a real method actor because she wasn’t wearing a bra so her full breasts were being exposed and she was wearing 18th century undergarments which were just long white pajama bottoms basically, man I hadn’t seen anybody wear those in ages. I figured Jessica looked ridiculous, but not enough so I went backstage to the shop and got some glue. I walked back to Jessica and removed her wig. I squeezed some glue in the wig and in Jessica’s black hair as well and then placed the wig back on. Once that was done I took the dress with me offstage and unfroze time. The music resumed and Jessica kept singing but then the music stopped as soon as Jessica sung off key and screamed. Everyone in the audience was laughing in surprise because I don’t think they expected Jessica to go so far as to wear everything 18th century. Jessica covered her breast and covered as much as she could of her underwear and made a face of pure hatred. “Goddammit costumes, I told you guys to pin my dress up more!” she shouted. Man, I wanted to get on with the next girl but now I had to do something else to Jessica. I froze time again and pulled out my cell phone and dialed Minos’ number. “Hello?” he answered. “Hey boss it’s Zeke, I was wondering if you could send me up a metal chastity belt?” “What the hell for?” Minos asked a little confused. “Well I’m taking care of one of the girls on the list and I think this is appropriate.” “All right I’ll send one up, by the way, you’re doing a great job. The girls you’ve taken care of already are thinking twice before opening their mouths.” Minos hung up and as soon as I put my phone away, a flame burst in my hand and I now had my chastity belt in my hands. I walked over to Jessica and removed her 18th century undergarments and placed the chastity belt on her. Since thongs were the style these days, the chastity department had designed these special metal thongs with locks on them, which I thought was nice. I put her other pair of underwear back on but I pulled off the lining on the waste off so it would immediately fall as soon as I snapped my fingers. I walked back offstage and unfroze time to watch my finished product. As soon as I snapped my fingers, Jessica’s underwear dropped down and Jessica’s jaw dropped as she tried to cross her legs and cover her crotch. Jessica’s shock changed to puzzlement when she felt metal. She looked down and screamed even louder when she realized what she was wearing. “I don’t know which one of you did this but I swear to god I’ll get you kicked off the show!” she shouted. Jessica headed offstage and went to grab her wig to throw it off and screamed in pain when it would not budge. Jessica uncovered her chest as she tried frantically to use both hands to pull the wig off but with no success. The audience and the orchestra were laughing at Jessica who really did look like an heiress in the 18th century, just one without any clothes. I left Jessica in her state of undress as I exited backstage and crossed her off the list, The next girl on the list made me think things were going to be a bit different for her. Name: STEPHANIE MCBALE Offense: On the fencing squad. Can get very competitive and holds grudges with people who almost show her up in fencing. When she squares off with them, she actually tries to hurt them by playing very aggressively. I had an idea already planned out. First I made my way back to the gym where the mats had been laid out for fencing practice. I looked off to the side and it seemed that some of the teachers were interviewing some of the girls from the volleyball team, I could have made an easy guess about what they were asking them. Stephanie was standing off to the side watching two other fencers square off. When they were finished, it was Jessica’s turn. She put her mask on and squared off with another girl. When the coach called for the girls to start Stephanie quickly lunged at the other girl who wasn’t expecting her to be so aggressive. The girl was losing balance and when Stephanie made another aggressive lunge at her, the girl fell down and twisted her ankle. The coach rushed to the girl’s aid while Stephanie stood back and took her mask off. A couple of the girl’s friends rushed to her aid and helped their friend up. “You two girls help me take her to the nurse’s office. McBale is in charge everybody continue sparring.” The coach said. The coach led the three girls towards the doors and as they were leaving I noticed a pretty nasty look of satisfaction that Stephanie had as she watched that girl. Before I could do anything, one guy stood up and got in Stephanie’s face. “That was bullshit Stephanie and you know it!” he said. “It was an accident Jeff, and besides, mind your business.” “Oh yeah accident, I told you we were over with!” “That’s fine I just can’t believe you left me for her.” “That’s it!” Jeff took a step away and put his mask on which got a few oohs and ahhs from the crowd. “Okay, you want to hurt someone? Hurt me.” Stephanie smiled at the challenge and put her mask on as well and got into her stance. She took the cover off of her sword and threw it to the side. “Then let’s cut the bullshit and really hurt each other.” She said. Jeff took his cover off and then got into his fighting stance. The two opponents squared off but just before they did anything I froze time. I walked up to Jeff’s body and carried it off behind the bleachers. I stripped Jeff down to his boxers and put on his fencing gear and mask. It’s not that I doubted Jeff’s fencing abilities, it’s just that I had a job to do and I figured just beating Stephanie at her own game wouldn’t be enough to put her in her place. I grabbed the volleyball nets that were stashed in the back and tied Jeff up and then I stuffed a sock in his mouth to make sure he wouldn’t cause any attention. I walked back to where Jeff originally stood and snapped my fingers unfreezing time. Stephanie started circling and I knew I had to act fast because she looked ready to hurt me. With my hand around the sword, I quickly brought my pointer finger against my thumb and rubbed them slowly together. All of the sudden, Stephanie started moving extremely slower than normal, which is what I wanted. What was great about this was, nobody could tell that time had slowed down, all it would look like is as if I was super fast. I watched Stephanie slowly circle me and then at a normal pace I walked behind her. Stephanie still faced in the direction where I originally stood before standing in a normal stance out of confusion, and then she slowly turned to where I currently was. Everybody in the crowd did the same thing and I could see their look of amazement as they stared at me wondering why I was so fast. Now was the time to get to work. I started by walking close to Stephanie and with slow precision slashed the buttons off of her vest. Stephanie looked as if she was going to lunge at me just as hard as she did to the other girl but before she could, she dropped her sword and stepped back as her buttons slowly flew into the air in slow motion. Stephanie’s vest flew open exposing her red and green plaid bra. I stood back folding my arms and heard everybody in the crowd laugh in slow motion. I allowed Stephanie to cover herself and then she quickly bent down to pick up her sword and lunged at me again. I gave her five seconds as she lunged at me before sidestepping her. Still in the lunging position, I slashed the rest of her vest until it slid completely off of her torso. Stephanie stopped again as she watched her vest fall to the ground. Stephanie let out a low deep roar and charged at me again. This time, I ran at her and slashed at one side of the hip of her pants. I then ran around her in a circle slashing the back, the other side and the front of her pants before running back to where I was standing. Jessica was charging at me but immediately slowed down as she felt the clothing around her legs slowly come apart until it was nothing but pieces on the floor. Jessica dropped her sword this time as her hands flew in the air out of shock as she stood there now in her matching red and green plaid bra and panties. I couldn’t help but laugh, she looked like a Christmas present. Stephanie’s arms slowly covered her chest and panties as she crossed her legs. With her legs crossed, her ass stuck out so I decided to do the finished touches. I rubbed my fingers some more to slow time down even more. I then walked behind Stephanie and with my claws, I cut along the backside of her underwear until there was very little of it covering her backside. Then I grabbed the back of her panties and lifted them up making it look like a thong. Nobody could tell what I was doing because to them, I was just a white blur. To finished things off, I took my sword and made a small “Z” on her exposed butt cheek. Satisfied with my work I walked back to where originally stood and snapped my fingers to bring things up to speed. Stephanie was still covering herself but then she yelped as the pain from the cut I gave her came. She put her hands on her behind but when she felt the flesh of her own ass instead of what she expected to be silk, she screamed even louder. Everybody watching was on the floor laughing. “You have been stripped by Zorro!” one of the girls shouted. “That was awesome Jeff!” another guy shouted. Just then the coach returned and his face grew beat red (almost as red as Stephanie’s) when he saw Stephanie in her state of undress. “What the hell is this?” he shouted. I took that as my cue to leave so I snapped my fingers to freeze time and put Jeff’s clothes back on and positioned him to where I was so he could be my scapegoat. “It was Jeff’s fault. I..I…he was so fast…” Stephanie stuttered, pointing at Jeff while covering herself with her other hand. Poor Jeff looked around, confused with everything and took his mask off. “No I didn’t! I don’t know how but I was tied up and naked behind the bleachers!” he said. “The only person that’s naked right now is Stephanie now you got some explaining to do.” Said the coach with his arms folded. As much as I wanted to hear Jeff smooth talk his way out of this, I had one more girl on the list before I could collect my paycheck. I walked out of the gym and looked down at the list to see who my final client was and what a beauty. She had auburn hair and was about 5’ 7”. She was quite slender with medium sized breasts. I looked down at the name before I fell too much in love with her, after all, this girl was beautiful, but didn’t act beautiful. Name: KATIE ALLMAN Offense: Katie was asked out by a student who she was not physically attracted to. But that’s not what she told him. Instead she told him that she had just broken up with someone, a lie, and that she wasn’t ready to date again, also another lie. A day after, she finally asked out another student whom she was physically attracted to and whenever the other student tried to talk to her, she ignored him. Interesting case, but not enough details like the other ones to tell me where I could find her. I started walking around the main campus looking amidst the hundreds of students for Katie but with not luck. As I was walking I had all of the sudden a flyer in my hand that another girl had put in my hands. I looked down and it was a picture of Katie and another student. What luck, the flyer said that there was going to be a debate today between Katie and the other student for President. Poor Katie, I’m not much on politics but I know that not a lot of people were going to vote for someone who was about to lose her clothes in public. I walked over to the open football field where almost the entire campus body was gathering. Katie and the other student were already in the middle of the debate. As I pushed my way to the front, I overheard one student ask them about the dress code. Katie’s opponent was the first to answer. “I feel that with the harsh times that the economy is in, we have better things to do than worry about the dress code right now. Especially since I’ve heard nobody complaining about having to wear dress clothes on campus. The student turned to Katie who smiled and then made her reply. “If I’m elected, I will do everything in my power to allow casual clothes to be worn on campus.” The audience applauded while I snapped my fingers so I could get to the stage quicker. After bumping past the forest of frozen bodies, I hopped up on stage and made my way towards Katie. I took off her jacket and threw it offstage and then slowly unbuttoned her shirt. Once I got the shirt off I threw the jacket and the shirt offstage and stood to admire her black mesh bra with little hearts on them. You could almost see her nipples poking through. After admiring her upper torso, I slowly unzipped the back of Katie’s skirt and could see the matching mesh thong with hearts on them. Once I removed the skirt I could also see that Katie had on a black garter belt hooked to her stockings. I tossed her skirt offstage and walked to the back of the crowd and snapped my fingers. Katie was still smiling and the left side of the audience didn’t notice anything, but the far right of the audience gasped when they saw what Katie was wearing. Katie’s smile went away as she looked at the audience, and then down at her body before she screamed. The other side of the audience finally noticed that Katie was in her underwear and EVERYBODY started taking pictures. Before they could take more, Katie crouched behind her podium. Son of a b*tch, now I had to walk all the way up there again. All of the sudden, the podium disappeared and now Katie was crouched down in her underwear. Katie realized the podium was gone and tried crossing her legs and covering her chest. Soon after, Katie’s garter belt disappeared, and then both her stockings. Every time a bit of clothing disappeared, Katie would cover the area that was now unclothed and the audience just gasped even more. It’s a good thing they didn’t look to the back because they would have wondered what some dork with a ponytail was doing standing by a podium with a garter belt and stockings sitting on it. Soon after, Katie’s Bra was the next to go. Katie wondered why she felt her soft skin instead of soft mesh and when she realized what was gone, she covered her chest with both arms. The audience, and the other student onstage were all laughing as Katie tried covering her lower torso with her legs while covering her chest, it was almost like a dance. As Katie kept crossing one leg over another, she finally felt a cool breeze hit her behind and her lower groin area. I expected Katie to cover her now naked crotch too, instead she just froze in the stance she was in and didn’t move. Once I noticed that her lip was quivering, I knew that whatever over confidence this girl had was now long gone. I walked away from the still laughing audience and pulled out my cell phone and dialed Minos’ office again. “Hello?” Minos answered. “Hey Boss it’s me Zeke. Just called to have you guys send me home because I’m finished.” “Great job Zeke, the boss is really happy. How’d you like the change of routine?” “Oh I think I could get used to this.” I said smiling. “Good because we just fired somebody so we are short handed of workers. You might be doing this for another couple hundred years.” Minos said as if it was a bad thing.” I laughed and said, “Minos, I’m wishing I did this earlier.” I hung up my cell phone and stood still as I was engulfed in flames to be taken back to hell. Hey Karma may be a b*tch, but so were they. I took a couple days off in the eighth sphere before I got my next assignment. Being that i take a lot of pride in my work, I went to check into see if my duties had any effect on the girls on my list. So I checked on them up on the first sphere and found out the following. Sarah Frost: After Jessica managed to get home after walking through campus in just her boyfriends varsity jacket, she managed to boil up enough courage to come back to the mock trial. Although, her usual aggressive temper was under control because Jessica did not want to give the opposing team any reason to fire that back at her. Mandy, Sandy, and Andy: Whoo boy, did these girls get screwed. After the pictures were taken, the other girls on the volleyball team threatened to post them all over campus unless Mandy agreed to resign as captain. Mandy agreed to do so and they thought it was over. However, Andy, still could not keep her mouth shut and stole a boyfriend from another girl on the volleyball team and so the pictures were sent out all over campus and on the internet. Jessica Featherman: Jessica ended up losing a lot of her hair and had to cut it short from the glue. As for the chastity belt, the theatre department had to call a locksmith to get it unlocked (Lucifer bless those Demon keymakers). Jessica was so mortified at this moment that she was willing to do anything to keep everybody quiet. To my surprise, the costume crew said they did it and that if Jessica didn't wise up, they'd do it again and that kept Jessica in check. Stephanie McBale: Poor Jeff got expelled for being the scapegoat for what I did. Although, he didn't seem to mind, everybody on the fencing team still praised him for what he did. Stephanie, too embarrassed at her defeat and humiliation quit the fencing team. She is very afraid now whenever she is around sharp objects or if she is involved with anything competitive because she fears that what happened to her on that day will happen again. Katie Allman: Well congratulations to Katie, she got elected for President. She even mentioned the front page. Unfortunately for her, she was not wearing anything in that picture and even though she one 100 percent of the votes, the Dean "stripped" her of her presidency because of indecent exposure. Katie never got involved with politics again and is actually super shy around boys now. It's probably because they usually mention her mesh panties with the hearts on them whenever she gets into a conversation with them. So all and all, my work was a success and now I'm being given a new assignment. Even in hell things can work out for you. 
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great work! i was getting worried near the end that that'll be the last of it, but i was relieved to know Zeke kept his job. does this really mean you'll be making this a series?
if you're planning on writing more, i'd suggest that maybe you should try putting a bit more detail into things though to make it even more vivid, maybe describe the girls more, like how they look exactly in their outfits and states of undress, and maybe their figures and body types too. again, great work! i especially liked the part with Katie Allman.
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I know everyone has their own views of what they want to read, if I may suggest that maybe more along the lines of the pranks/revenge to restore the karma balance but keeping the ENF/nudity. I would also say that each one of the girls/victims could have been their own chapter as they each could benefit from more detail. Please post more
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woah, I didn't realize you meant Karmic Balance was your previous story! I read these on one of the other storyboards and really enjoyed them. Always hoped there would be more. Hope suggestions aren't too impetuous, but I was thinking it might be neat to introduce another demon in the Karmic department, one with another power, not sure what, the ability to grow or shrink things, or transmute matter? Anyways, my thought was that the new demon could be female, and Zeke starts wanting to use his power to expose her regardless of consequence.
Regardless, I'm sure whatever else you add will be great. Keep up the good work.
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 . Some of the suggestions you made aren't exactly what I did in later chapters BUT I do think you'll be pleased regardless, I'll be posting the chapter here soon, or if you really want to check it out now you can read the rest on my deviant art page
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great chapter is your name on deviantart the same as on here ?
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Karmic Balance Chapter 2: Las Vegas
I was in the middle of what was a great nap, until my cell phone called. I looked on my cell phone and saw that it was Minos calling. “Hello?” I answered. “Zeke, it’s Minos. I have a new list for you.” “Already? Where?” “Las Vegas.” “Boss, the people there are already going to hell. Why bother humiliating them?” “Eh, the G man wants to give them a second chance and figures humiliation is sort of a way to say to them, “Don’t get cocky.” I’m sending you a list now.” “Hey Minos.” “What?” “I’m not going to be walking around all of Nevada to look for people like last time. You send me the scroll on how to teleport or I’m putting in my two weeks.” “All right just get to work!” Sure enough a ball of flames shot up and a list appeared in air that slowly floated on my lap. Ever since I got the job in the Karma department, Minos was real happy with what I did the last time. I didn’t mind the new work but getting up in the middle of my nap just to go humiliate people living in a town where the economy was based on gambling and sex seemed like a waste of time. Soon after, another ball of flames shot up and another piece of paper fell onto my lap. I picked it up and read what it said. Roughly it said: This hereby clears Zeke to travel wherever he wants for purposes of business. All he has to do is concentrate on the location and he will be taken there. Thank God because if I had to walk around like last time I’d die from exhaustion. I got out of bed and headed over up to the 1st sphere and took the portal to Las Vegas for my next assignment. The next I knew, I was right in the middle of a city that lit up the night. Hundreds of people were walking all over the city ready to lose their money to the big casinos. I looked down and shook my head when I saw what Hell had given me as a disguise. This time I was a short and fat guy in his 40s wearing golf shorts and a polo shirt. This was getting ridiculous. Not wanting to be in this ridiculous state for as long as I had to, I looked down at the first name on the list. Name: BIANCA CROSS Offense: Supermodel who has a very bad diva complex. She managed to sabotage another models career by rubbing butter on her shoes causing her to sleep and break her leg. Bianca did this so she could get the other models’ spot. I looked at Bianca’s picture real closely so I could teleport where she was. She was a real skinny blonde with short hair, but for some reason her breasts were a size C which didn’t make any sense. I concentrated on her picture very hard praying that this would work because I knew this fat body I was in wasn’t going to get me very far. In no time at all I was teleported to the location of where Bianca was. She was doing a fashion show at a club. I was seated right up close to the walkway with all of these other hot shot wealthy people. Soon enough, scantily clad models started walking out. I guess the theme was organic material because instead of clothes, all the girls were wearing were bikinis made of plants. Some girls come out with palm fronds, another girl came out with fruit, it was really ridiculous, but it gave me an idea. It was funny watching all the men act calm when they were in front of half naked women. I would’ve bet a million bucks they were crossing their legs. Bianca was the next girl to come out and she was wearing a brassier made of lettuce leaves and her bottom was covered by a bunch of g****s held up by a vine. People pay millions of dollars for this? Bianca started walking down the isle with her emotionless face and her sassy walk. As soon as she was close to me I froze time. I rubbed my hands together really fast and then I touched both the lettuce and the g****s. When I rub my hands together, I speed up time. I always have to be careful when I speed time because that can cause a lot of things to age super quick so I have to touch the specific items I want to speed up otherwise everything would age super quick. Since Bianca and her fashion buddies were wasting good food anyway, I didn’t feel that bad causing this stuff to go rotten even quicker. I unfroze time and Bianca resumed walking down the catwalk. I could already see the lettuce and the g****s shriveling up and changing color, since I sped up their aging process. Bianca’s emotionless face started to wrinkle up in disgust when she got a huge whiff of rotten vegetation. Everyone in the room groaned and covered their noses. I could see her lettuce brassier slowly changing to a color of yellow and it started to shrivel up. Just as Bianca looked down, the straps of her lettuce bra rotted away and Bianca in sheer panic held up her bra from falling. I could also see the vine that wrapped around her waste starting to rot as well. All the guys in the audience started cheering. The vines around her started to slowly rot and the g****s covering her crotch started to drop. Bianca used her other hand to try and hold the g****s up. Unfortunately for Bianca, the g****s soon rotted and now her lower regions were purple from the juice. Bianca let her hand covering her chest drop to cover her bottom, but she forgot about her bra that was almost gone anyway and that fell down. What also fell out was Bianca’s two balls of what looked to be tissue paper she used to stuff her breasts with. That explained why she looked so funny, this supermodel in reality was as flat as a board. Bianca screamed and covered herself as she crossed her legs while everyone else covered their noses. One of the other models came out with a cloth and went to cover Bianca up. As soon as she wrapped her arms around Bianca, she got a whiff of her body, which reeked of rotted food and quickly walked away with the cloth. Bianca uncovered her breasts on accident when she tried to grab for the sheet and that cued the cameras to start flashing. It was almost like a scene in the Godfather when Sonny got shot at the tollbooth. Every time a flash hit a certain part of Bianca’s body, she would uncover one part of it to cover another part that the cameras captured on film. Whether or not her ego was shattered didn’t matter, her career was over with a horrible smell like that. I got out of my seat and pushed my way through the sea of photographers taking pictures of Bianca. As soon as I got out of the building I pulled out the list, crossed off Bianca’s name and looked down at the next one. I sat down on a bench on the street looking at the next client. Finally, I’d be able to go to the casinos for this one. Name: MELISSA PETERS Offense: A very confident professional poker player. She’s so good that she purposely cleans people out of their money leaving them stranded in Las Vegas. She can tell if they are about to leave the table and then convinces them to stay for one more game and takes them for everything they’ve got. I concentrated on the picture of Melissa and teleported to her location. The next thing I knew I was in the corner of a huge casino. I looked around for Melissa. She was sitting at a poker table and had a nice stack of chips already. She looked real wealthy with her long, silk, red dress and with her blonde hair tied up, almost too good like a call girl looks like. I had an idea of how to take care of Melissa but I was going to need something first so I pulled out my cell phone and dialed Minos’ number. “Hello?” “Hey boss it’s Zeke. Can you send me up a stack of chips for the casino?” “Are you gambling on the job Zeke?” Minos asked with impatience. “No I’m doing my job, I just need these chips to out play this girl. Trust me.” Minos just hung up the phone and soon after two stacks of chips appeared in my hand. Stuffing the chips in my pocket, I walked over to the table to see if I could get in on this. To break this girl’s spirit, I kind of felt I had to beat her at her own game. Melissa didn’t really pay any attention to me, but she was going to be after I got through with her. The dealer dealt the cards and Melissa placed the first bet. I snapped my fingers to freeze time and then got up to look at what Melissa’s hand was. All she had was a two pair. I unfroze time and called her bet. We all discarded our cards and got new ones. I froze time again and looked at Melissa’s new hand, she had a full house now. All I had was a pair, so I just searched through the deck until I found the correct cards to make a straight flush. I got back to my seat and unfroze time. Melissa placed a bet and I raised. Melissa then gave this cocky smirk of interest as if no one ever raised her before. She grabbed some more chips and raised again. Without being phased, I raised her again. Melissa grabbed another stack of her chips and raised again. “Are you sure you want to do that?” I asked. “What’s a matter buddy? Getting a little nervous?” she said sarcastically. “Just making sure you don’t make a mistake.” I said. “I know what I’m doing.” I shrugged and raised her again. I knew she was trying to clean me out now which was fine because these chips had no value to me. This time she bet all in and pushed all of her chips forward with a very wide grin on her face. “I don’t see why you’re so excited, I don’t have any more chips.” I said. “Yeah but you have to stay in after betting all that.” she said as if she were a teacher. “Maybe I don’t want to.” “Come on, be a man. Stay in.” “I don’t have anything else to bet.” Melissa frowned in disappointment for a moment, but then her eyes widened and I could tell she had an idea when she asked, “What kind of a car do you have?” “A Jaguar” I lied. “Well bet that then sweetie.” “Fine.” I said, “But if I win, you have to take off that dress for me, in front of everyone.” “Deal” she said without any hesitation. Man she was a gambler. I held out my hand to seal the deal and she proudly shook it thinking she’d be able to beat me. Smiling, I laid out my hand showing her the straight flush. Melissa’s jaw dropped and her eyes widened as she dropped her cards. She froze in disbelief, not only had she lost over fifty grand but she was also about to lose her dignity. Ah, what a fine day’s work. “Okay sweetheart, strip.” I said. Melissa just scoffed and stood up from her seat. “Screw you fat boy. No one is seeing me with my clothes off and if you try to report this, I’ll sue your ass for sexual harassment!” Melissa stormed off from the table and I just shook my head as I snapped my fingers to stop her. I hate sore losers. I got up from my seat and walked up to Melissa. I unclasped the back of the dress that wrapped around her neck and slowly pulled it down. I let the part of the dress that I pulled off her hang down from her torso as I took a minute to admire her breasts. She had a nice curvy body with full breasts, not like Bianca’s who had the skinny supermodel body. She may have been a worthless gambler but she worked out. I put my fingers inside the part of the dress that was resting around her waste and pulled the rest down leaving Melissa in her black thong and high heel shoes. I walked behind Melissa to admire her firm backside. After taking some time to stare at her ass, I grew my claws out and cut her thong from either side. Satisfied with my work, I picked up the dress and walked back to the poker table hiding it under the table. I snapped my fingers and Melissa kept walking. She stopped mid stride as she felt what she thought to be her thong falling from her waste. She looked down and was mortified to see that her senses were right. Melissa didn’t bother covering herself up, she just stood their with her mouth open exposing herself to everyone. Some guy in the room whistled and I guess that broke Melissa from her trance. She screamed out loud and tried covering herself. As she crossed her legs, she lost her balance from wearing her heels and she fell flat on her face with her rear end sticking out. Everyone in the room started laughing as Melissa tried getting up while still covering herself. Just then, two police officers showed up and grabbed Melissa’s arms exposing her again. “Wh..what are you doing?” she asked. “Throwing you out miss, violation of dress code.” One of the officers said. “N..no! You can’t throw me out like this!” she shouted helplessly. The officers didn’t listen to her as they drug her towards the doors. Melissa tried to drag her feet and kept kicking and screaming but she wasn’t strong enough to fight the police. Melissa was thrown out of the casino and she felt a cold air hit her entire body as she fell on the steps. Melissa quickly got up and started pounding on the doors begging to be let back in. Everyone in the casino stood there laughing at Melissa. Melissa kept screaming to be let in until she stopped and listened. She heard a large roar of hoots and hollers and she turned around to find that there was a huge crowd outside that was looking at her. Melissa screamed again and covered herself running down the streets. Where she went? I’ll never know. There aren’t many places you can go without any money or clothes. I got up from my seat leaving my chips behind and looked down at the next name on the list. Name: OFFICER TAMMY BANKS Offense: Profiles young kids and thinks they are doing drugs. She actually busted an honor role student by planting pot on her person and she got the girl arrested. I could tell this woman was a tough one. She was a busty woman with her brown hair done up in a bun holding a nightstick. She looked like she couldn’t be broken at all, well, at least till I got through with her. I concentrated on Tammy’s picture and teleported to the police station where I ended up in the parking lot. I turned around and could see Tammy pushing a girl into the police station. I watched from the window as Tammy checked the girl in at the desk. The girl looked to be in her twenties and looked like she was out clubbing because she was dressed in a pink mini-skirt and white sleeveless top. After the clerk was done, Tammy pushed the crying girl to the back. As Tammy opened the door, I froze time so I could get into the room she was entering and hid behind a flag off in the corner to see where they were going next. I unfroze time and watched as Tammy led the girl to an empty cell. “You can’t do this!” the girl said between sobs, “You can’t plant ecstasy on me and turn me in!” “I just did honey.” Tammy said rather coldly, “And that’s not all I’m going to do to you, stupid sorority sl*t!” Tammy pushed the girl into the cell and walked in as well before shutting the door. The girl started to back away until she was against a wall. She was really scared, her lip was quivering. I couldn’t say that I could blame her being in a room with this very intimidating woman. “Take off your shirt.” Tammy said. The girls looked at Tammy with confusion. “Wh..what? No you can’t..” “I’m checking you to see if you have other drugs now strip!” Tammy said more fiercely. The girl’s hands started shaking as she slowly grabbed the bottom of her shirt and lifted it up over her head exposing a hot pink bra. The girl threw her shirt to the side and then covered her breasts as she turned red from embarrassment. Tammy laughed a little as she took her nightstick and placed it up against one of the girls’ breasts. “Nice implants, did your daddy pay for them?” she asked. The girl didn’t answer, all she did was start crying as she pushed the nightstick away and tried to cover herself even more. Tammy wasn’t finished. “Now take off your skirt.” She said. The girl’s eyes widened in shock and she started shaking her head frantically. Tammy shot the girl an evil look and pulled out a knife from her pocket. “Take it off now!” she shouted. The girl shook her head now as she crouched down into the corner hoping for an escape. With great speed, Tammy took the knife and lunged at the girl’s lower waist. The girl screamed as she jumped up out of reflex. I thought she stabbed the girl but all Tammy did was cut off the fastener on the side of her skirt. Sure enough, the girl’s skirt slowly slid down off of her waist and to her feet leaving the girl in her bra and pink thong. The girl turned to the corner and tried covering her body as much as possible while Tammy just laughed and said, “I can’t stand you innocent sorority girls acting so pure and then wearing sl*tty underwear like that. It’s all because your parents never disciplined you enough. Well I’ll fix that!” Tammy advanced toward the girl who crumbled in the corner. Tammy grabbed the girl’s hand and pulled it away from the girls’ chest. Next, Tammy grabbed her handcuffs from her belt and cuffed one end of the cuff to one of the bars high up in the cell and the other end was cuffed to the girls’ hand. The girl was practically on her tiptoes from the other end of the handcuffs being so high; she couldn’t even cover herself anymore. Tammy then pulled another pair of handcuffs out and repeated the same process with her other hand leaving the girl defenseless. The girl was crying even louder now and was kicking her legs trying to escape. “What have I done to you?” she asked sobbing. “You’re a goddamn spoiled little rich girl who got everything as a little kid and feels they can do whatever they want! Well I’ll show you that you’re not better than other people!” Tammy said as she took off her gun belt and wrapped it up ready to spank her. I snapped my fingers and froze time because I had seen enough. I walked into the cell and grabbed Tammy’s keys to uncuff the girl. Once I got her uncuffed, I decided to put her clothes back on her. I don’t know if she was good or bad, but I had a job to do and this girl was going to be a part of it so she needed to have her confidence back which meant putting her clothes back on. Once I had the girl standing up right, I walked behind Tammy and wrapped my arms around her waist and unbuckled her belt, pulling it through her belt loops and wrapping it up before putting it in the girls hand. I then grabbed Tammy’s police tie and removed it from over her head. Next was Tammy’s shirt. One by one, I slowly undid the buttons along her police shirt and then I unzipped the top of her pants to undo the bottom button of her shirt. Once she was unbuttoned I removed Tammy’s shirt exposing her white C cup bra. After I threw her shirt to the side, I put my hands on the inside of the band of her pants and yanked them down. What a hypocrite. Little miss “I hate thong panties” was wearing a white cotton thong with the brand Jockey printed on the waste line. Oh well, it would be better for the girl to spank her ass with. Speaking of Tammy’s ass, I looked at it and saw that she had a tattoo on her left butt cheek of a kiss mark on it. What was up with this woman? Oh well, next I grabbed the handcuffs and hand cuffed Tammy to the bars of the cell with her backside facing us. I grabbed Tammy’s clothes and left the cell with them and hid back behind the flag. I snapped my fingers and resumed time and watched as the tables turned. The girl was still crying but she stopped when she realized she was no longer handcuffed and was clothed with a belt in her hand. Tammy on the other hand was no longer smiling as she realized she was handcuffed. As she was struggling to get free she could feel a cool breeze hitting her exposed skin. Tammy looked down and gasped when she realized she was half naked. Tammy started kicking her legs and her face started turning red from embarrassment. Her face turned redder when she turned her head to see that the girl was standing behind her. “I don’t know how you did this you little b*tch but get me down from here now!” she demanded. The girl didn’t answer at all, she was almost on the floor laughing at Tammy’s tattoo. “Why the hell do you have that on your ass lady?” she asked between giggles. Tammy turned her head and looked down and gasped when she saw that her tattoo was exposed as well. She was now starting to get tears in her eyes. “Don’t…look at that!” she said, “Only my husband is supposed to know about that!” “Did you have somebody kiss your ass and then get a tattoo of it?” the girl asked. “N.no, I kissed a piece of paper and then had it traced on.” Tammy said without thinking but then she gasped again and shut her mouth before she embarrassed herself even more. “Wait a minute” the girl said looking at Tammy’s backside some more. “You were going to whip me for wearing a thong and I see you wearing a thong as well as a tattoo to show your husband?” “Shut up!” Tammy cried out beginning to cry. “I think I’ll have to discipline you then since your parents didn’t.” the girl said cracking the belt, boy she would be a great worker on the sixth sphere. The girl brought her hand back and with strong force, swung the belt on Tammy’s backside making a loud smacking sound causing Tammy to cry out in pain. “St..stop it now!” Tammy said pathetically, trying to maintain control. The girl didn’t listen as she kept whipping Tammy’s backside until it was almost as red as her face. When the girl finally got tired she set the belt down and said, “Well I think you’ve learned your lesson. Will you drop the charges and get me out of here then?” she asked. “Y..yes” Tammy said. The girl got the keys from the ground and uncuffed Tammy’s hand. As soon as it was uncuffed, Tammy’s hand reached around the girl and grabbed her. The girl screamed and dropped the keys right in Tammy'’ hand. Tammy head butted the girl in the back of the head knocking her down and uncuffed her other hand. Geez she was tough. Tammy smiled as she knelt down to pull of the girl’s skirt but I froze time before she could do anything. I picked the girl up from the ground and move her out of the cell leaving Tammy alone in the cell. I walked behind Tammy and grabbed the back of her bra unclasping it. As I removed her bra, her breasts bounced freely for a little bit. Next I put my thumbs through the waistband of her thong and pulled those down and around her ankles leaving Tammy completely naked. I threw her underwear in the pile with the rest and then shut the cell door, taking the keys with me. As I hid behind the flag again I unfroze time to finish my work here. The girl rubbed the back of her head and winced at the bruise that formed on it. The girl looked up and laughed again as she saw Tammy locked in the cell completely naked. Tammy still didn’t have a clue. She still had this pissed off look on her face as if she was still in control. “What are you laughing at? Get me out of here now!” Tammy shouted. The girl just flipped Tammy off as she pointed at her laughing. The girl’s pointing reminded Tammy that she was in her underwear so her arms flew to her chest and her crotch. Tammy’s angry face changed to a shocked face when her hands felt her naked skin instead of her underwear. Tammy screamed as her legs crossed together and she hunched over. She really shouldn’t have screamed because the door from the other room busted open as the other policemen on the force rushed in to the rescue. All of the policeman looked around ready to save the day but stopped when they saw their b*tchy partner locked naked in a cell. All of the men started hooting and hollering when they saw Tammy in there. One of the officers walked up to the girl with a stern look on his face and asked, “Did you do this?” Tammy smiled with devilish glee because she knew that this girl would get in big trouble now that the others caught her in the act. Whatever did happen, this girl was getting the blame for it. The girl couldn’t say anything because she was so surprised to see all of the police officers there. The police officer’s stern look was replaced with a look of amusement as he turned to examine Tammy’s body. “Because it’s about time somebody put Tammy in her place.” He said. Tammy’s jaw nearly dropped to the floor when she heard her partner say that. “What?” she said, “She did this! Arrest her!” “Even if she did good for her because everyone here is sick and tired of your intimidation Tammy!” the police officer said. “And by the way, nice tattoo.” Tammy’s face turned to a reddish purple color when she was reminded of her embarrassing tattoo. Her hands left her naked body to cover up the tattoo on her butt. All the guys in the room hollered even louder when Tammy’s breasts were exposed. Poor Tammy didn’t know what to do. Her hands would go from her breasts, to her crotch and then to her ass and then all over again. With all of the guys in the room talking, I decided to make my escape and left the police officers to enjoy their hated employee’s humiliation. As I exited the police station I pulled out the list to look at the next person. The next person on the list was a lot different from the rest of the women on the list. Name: AMY LAROUCHE Offense: Obsessed with the occult. She found a book on black magic and she believes she can control us through this book. Get to her before she does something stupid and show her that no human controls us at all. Oh boy, another Goth kid trying to summon a devil, this was going to be fun. I looked at the picture of Amy, nice very slender and curvy girl wearing a black mini skirt and a corset with devil wings. Her jet-black hair and black lipstick made her skin look even paler. I focused on her image and concentrated to teleport to her location. I was engulfed in flames and then reappeared in an empty old abandoned building. I looked around for Amy and there sitting on an open floor was Amy sitting in a circle with a pentagram on it. Crap, she was already half through whatever she was doing, if I didn’t act quick she was going to do something real stupid. I had to be careful because those pentagram circles can hurt like hell if the person drew it with the right material. It was too late because she already started chanting. ” She shouted out“ loud. Boy was I lucky, roughly what she said was something stupid like “baby make me hard all over” so I knew she had no clue what she was doing. I snapped my fingers and walked up to her. Immediately, Amy turned her head and her eyes glowed red. Something was going wrong here. “Who the ... are you?” Amy growled and as she growled she let out a loud roar that sent me back about seven feet. Okay, maybe she did know what she was doing. My time powers worked on humans but they didn’t work nearly as well on demons or demonic powers. Amy started advancing toward me so I decided to throw off my human disguise and donned by actual handsome demonic image. “It worked. You are under my control!” she said with excitement. “Sweetheart, I don’t know what you did. But humans don’t control demons at all.” I said as I grew my claws out. I lunged at Amy and slashed at her upper torso planning on exposing her breasts. Instead, I was sent back another seven feet as soon as I touched her body. I finally knew what this crazy girl did. She somehow managed to cast the spell for “Unholy Armor” on her clothes, making her invincible to almost anything, including demons like myself. Amy started laughing getting real cocky that she managed to kick a demons' ass. That pissed me off, it was time to get even. I got up to my feet and concentrated on a new area that I wanted to be and was soon teleported to a set of stairs in an unknown location outside of Earth. There was no way I could be able to penetrate Amy’s armor. It would take a sizeable army from hell to do that. But I didn’t want hell knowing I was having problems so I went to someone who could. I walked up the set of stairs, which seemed like it was forever and finally made it up to the desk of St. Peter. St. Peter was busy looking through a newspaper unaware of my presence until I cleared my throat. St. Peter put down his paper and looked down to see me. “Oh it’s you Zeke. What brings you to these parts?” he asked. St. Peter was a pretty cool guy, didn’t have too much of an issue with us demons, just with the big L. “Uh hey Peter. Is Michael around? I kind of need his help.” “Yes I know, that Amy girl has definitely gotten into a lot of trouble hasn’t she?” he said. “Yeah no kidding. Can you send him out?” “Yes.” St. Peter said as he pushed the call button. “Michael, I have an assignment for you. Please meet me outside of the gates.” I waited for about ten minutes until the pearly gates swung open and out came a huge man with long hair and a magnificent pair of wings, it was the angel Michael. “What seems to be the problem?” he asked Peter. “There is a girl down in Las Vegas who managed to summon up unholy armor. Zeke needs you to come down with him to remove it from her.” Peter said. “I see.” Michael said looking at me, “Can’t handle a Goth girl and her Lil Devil’s occult kit?” “Shut up Halo boy and let’s get going.” I said. Stupid angels thinking they’re so big with their flaming swords. We teleported back down to where I originally left. Amy was still in the abandoned building working with her new powers. She was floating in air reading her book. “This is incredible! No one can stop me now!” she said defiantly. Between trying to control us and now saying she couldn’t be stopped, Amy was definitely going to deserve what she got. Michael grinned as his wings spread and as he unsheathed his sword. It caught Amy’s attention and she turned to Michael. She started laughing when in reality, she should have been running for her dear life. “An angel? That’s pathetic. God can’t stop me! No one can!” she said. I just started laughing at the girl’s stupid comments and leaned over to Michael’s ear. “Hey, don’t kill her all right? She’s just supposed to be humiliated. This is my job not yours okay?” I said. Michael smirked a little bit as he took flight and then his sword ignited into flames. Amy started flying towards Michael and he flew towards her. Amy had no clue what she was in for. “Unholy entity, I banish you from this realm and into oblivion!” Michael shouted. God always had to be dramatic. Michael lifted his sword up and swung it down on Amy. It almost looked like he was going to cut her in half. Instead, his sword bounced off of Amy and it sent Michael and Amy off of their balance. Amy looked down and started laughing when she realized she was okay. “You see? Nothing can stop me!” she said again. Amy started to float towards us and as she was floating, flames burst out around her and her corset was engulfed in flames. Amy immediately started screaming because she had no clue that Michael’s sword was the only thing that could destroy unholy armor. Her corset started to rapidly catch fire. Her threads were the first to burn away and that loosened her corset, causing it to slide down. Amy quickly grabbed each side of her corset to hold it up. It didn’t matter because soon enough, the rest of the corset caught fire and disintegrated leaving Amy topless in her long black skirt. Amy covered her breasts with both arms and had a real embarrassed look on her face. Just then, her skirt ignited from the bottom and started to slowly disintegrate towards the top. “No!” Amy shrieked as she uncovered her breasts to try and put out the flames from her skirt, “Please, not my skirt! I’ll do anything, I’m sorry I won’t do it again!” Boy she sounded really sincere, I wondered what the big deal was as I saw her makeup start to run from the tears in her eyes. I couldn’t do anything, the armor was destroyed and that meant the clothes that it inhabited as well. As Amy’s upper thighs were now exposed leaving her dress a mini-skirt, she crossed her legs and tried to grab the bottom of what was left of the skirt. Of course, that did not work as she quickly let go from burning her hands. As the last of her skirt burnt away, Amy dropped to her knees trying to cover her white cotton panties with little strawberries on them. That explained why she was freaking out. Give me a break. Michael burst out into laughter as he sheathed his sword. “These are the people that worship you Zeke?” he said between snickers. “Yeah.” I sighed, “No wonder you guys won the first war. Hey Mikey, don’t tell anyone else about this okay?” Michael nodded and touched his halo. A beam of light cast down over him and he teleported back up to heaven leaving me with the scary Goth girl and her cute little panties. Amy started moving towards me on her knees with her hand out. “Please, give me some clothes, I told my friends that I was conjuring up a spell and they’ll be here any minute if they seem me like this…” she whimpered. “Oh so not only did you think you were better than us, but you were going to exploit us to your friends as well?” I asked, “Y…yes.” She said. Okay, that pissed me off even more. I hate it when people try to make a joke out of us. I snapped my fingers and froze time. I picked Amy up and stood her in the pentagram circle that she made. I then made a chant of my own that would freeze her body for five hours and then I unfroze time. Amy started looking around and I could tell she was trying to move as she was grunting. “You can squirm all you want but you’re in that position for five hours honey. Think twice before you decide to play with the big boys all right?” I said as I walked away. Amy started screaming and between sobs kept calling back. “Please don’t leave me like this! My friends can’t see me like this!” I rolled my eyes turned my head to shout at Amy, “What’s the matter? Having a hard time being a scary Goth girl when you are still wearing your underwear that you wore when you were five?" Amy’s makeup was clearly all gone because I could see her face turning beat red and just as I walked out of the door, I heard a group of kids walking in. I looked back and saw a bunch of kids with dyed hair, Mohawks and other crazy styles walking in. “Hey Amy where’s this Satanic power you conjured up huh?” one of the guys asked. “Oh dude check this out!” another one said. All of Amy’s friends found her standing there in her bear panties and burst out laughing. Amy just kept crying as her friends busted out their cell phone cameras and took pictures. What a great way to end the night. I walked out of the abandoned building and text messaged Minos, telling him I was finished and was teleported back to hell. Hey, you dance with the devil, the devil don’t change, the devil changes you, or at least undresses you. Epilogue: After a day had passed on Earth I decided to check up on my clients to see if they had changed at all, I kind of liked finding out about old clients and seeing how much they had changed after I changed them. Bianca Cross: Poor Bianca, sadly her modeling career was over as she got the reputation for “model with worst hygiene” not to mention being exposed as a phony model who stuffed her breasts. Since the photographers had a field day with her exposed body, she decided to cash in on it and tried doing some porn. She never had the same status she did when she was a supermodel. Melissa Peters: Melissa Peters was arrested and picked up in the streets of Las Vegas for indecent exposure. With no money and no friends to bail her out of jail she was forced to pay a fine. Since she had no money either, she was stuck in prison for a lengthy bit of time. As far as I know, she’s still in prison and no one has bothered to get her out. Officer Tammy: Tammy got suspended for abuse of a prisoner and planting evidence. To top that off, the girl she planted evidence on sued her and she lost even more money. When Tammy returned to work she was given the nickname “Ass Kisser” and she was very shy and timid after that. Whenever Tammy would arrest someone and take them to the cells, she’d force the person to go in before her so she could always see them, for fear of having what happened to her again. Amy LaRouche: Amy lost all of her Goth friends when they realized she was just a poser. Amy threw away all of her gothic stuff and started wearing the hot clothes from American Eagle and such. She went from being a devilish Goth girl to a snobby stuck up girl who made fun of everyone. However, her Goth friends found out about Amy’s new identity and decided to pay her a visit when she went shopping at a mall. When she wasn’t looking, they ripped off Amy’s mini skirt exposing her in her Hello Kitty bikini briefs. Thank God too because I didn’t want to have to go up there again. Minos was real happy with my work this time. I did too, I felt like I knew more of what I was doing. Things seemed like they were really turning out good for me until someone else decided to rain on my parade.
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