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Kitty VS Jane (X-men story)
(The characters are taken from the x-men 3 movie. Kitty is Ellen Page and Jane is Famnke Janssen)
It was raining at night. Inside the mansion the mutants were about to go to sleep since it was a good weather for it. Kitty was in the mansion looking for a backpack she let in a room during the day but she can't remember which one. Kitty was wearing some baggy pants with a brown belt, a white buttoned shirt with shirt sleeves, black shoes, black hair and cute as she can ever be. She enters a room and sees that Jane grey is staring at the windows outside she is wearing some blue jean, red long sleeves with a white shirt underneath, brown boots and she has brown hair. KITTY Hi Jane Jane wasn't looking at her JEAN Oh hello kitty... KITTY Have you seen my... JEAN Backpack? KITTY ...yeah...how'd you... JEAN Cause you kind of always loose it, it's routine KITTY Ha ha yeah im always getting my head in the clouds JEAN Its right on the sofa Kitty goes and gets her backpack and before she goes outside the room, the door closes kitty is in suspense, she turns around and sees Jane JEAN You know... Jane turns around with a horny look JEAN I''m kinda bored... Kitty is there confused at her looks JEAN It's just another rainy Sunday with nothing else to do...i need some excitement KITTY Wha-...what do you mean? JEAN Hmmm...take a clue? KITTY ...are you okay? JEAN You look very pretty today KITTY Oh...huh...thanks JEAN You're really attractive KITTY ...hmm okay this feels very weird im just gonna go... Jean Hmmm Nice belt Kitty Huh? Kitty slowly looks down at her waist and feel her belt move. The belt is unbuckling by itself slowly and sexy, from the 3rd hole of the bulge. Kitty raises her eyebrows, not believing she is getting undressed by telekinesis. The belt gets undone and rests by the hoops KITTY What are you doing? JEAN ...guess you won't be needing this anymore. Jean raises her right hand and kitty's belt is pulled from her pants really fast. She drops her backpack to catch catch the belt but couldn't The belt goes to jean's right hand. She examines it JEAN You know...i always love the craftsman ship of making clothe. KITTY OK can i please get it back? JEAN Hmmmm...why? Are your pants loose without it? Kitty's pants were falling from her waist a little JEAN I can see your baby blue underwear Kitty gasps and grabs her pants from the sides and raised them JEAN (Giggles & bites lips) you're so silly. Jean focuses on the button on kitty's pants The button starts to move left and right. Kitty watches it afraid of revealing her panties KITTY (Whispers) No. The button pops of from her pants KITTY (Whispers) Stop... Jean then unzips her pants with her mind and it lowers slow and sexy. Then she focuses on the entire zipper and rips it off her pants letting kitty know she owns the situation. Jean starts to walk towards kitty. Kitty starts to shake, trying to close the broken gap in front of her pants and begins to blush while biting her lips and closing her eyes from the embarrassing situation. Jean is on front of kitty JEAN (Giggles) so how are you going to hold your pants now? Kitty stays silent while shaking Jean approaches really close to kitty's lips JEAN You're really cute when you blush. Jean gives Kate a sexy kiss, slowly touches her hair with her finger Kitty follows jean's lips with her own Kitty is still with her eyes closed but her excitement makes her raises her eyebrows. Kitty starts to heat up uncontrollably. Jean sticks her tongue in kitty's mouth and kitty opens her eyes wide. Suddenly kitty's pants trespass her hands. Her pants fall down but then trespasses through her shoes and the floor. Kitty and jean look down at the floor KITTY Huh? What the? JEAN Oh...looks like you're loosing control of your powers... you're nervous? KITTY Eh-no that's not true Then kitty's shoes trespass her feet and then the floor Kitty reacts that her shoes are gone and that she is in her socks, panties and white blouse JEAN They don't call you kitty for nothing Jean looks at her waist and points out at her panties. Kitty looks down shaking and to her discomfort has revealed her panties. Her panties has strings on the side with a cute baby blue color a dark blue in the waistband and in the middle it has a cute gray cat logo. Kitty uses both hand to cover her panties and bend her knees a little JEAN Such a cliché pose Kitty makes a run for it she tries to go through a wall but hits herself and can't get pass it KITTY Ouch! What? She tries a second time KITTY What's happening? JEAN (Laugh) your powers are gone sweety KITTY No no!! JEAN you are too unfocused... Kitty is embarrassed and weak since she can't go through the walls. She sees the door and runs towards it Kitty tries to open the door but the door gets locked by itself because of Jane JEAN Now imagine if you step out the door, do you want to reveal your childish panties to anyone? That should be fun Kitty reacts surprise because she wasn't aware of the problems she might face JEAN I can imagine they all be talking about those sweet little panties of yours KITTY Im gonna tell the professor and everyone how ****y you are. JEAN (Laughs) you think that's a threat? OK how about this...you tell anyone and i will rip what's left of your clothe in front of others, i can see you naked in front of the professor KITTY (Gasp) you wouldn't dare? JEAN Really? You are so stupid...tell me do you feel a little chilly? Must be real cold without your pants. Jean walks towards kitty KITTY Stay back i'm warning you JEAN Or what? KITTY I...i huh... JEAN Tsk tsk tsk poor thing you don't know what to do...i got a suggestion Jean focuses on kitty's shirt and pops off one button from the bottom of her shirt. Kitty watches and starts nodding saying no KITTY Please...i beg you... JEAN Relax sweety. this is gonna be fun One by one from bottom to top. The buttons keep coming off. Kitty is shaking. Her tops opens slowly and it reveals matching colors JEAN Hmmmm...i love the way you dress, oh your sweating? Kitty's heavy breathing gives out she's aroused JEAN Oh what's this? Your nipples are happy Her nipples were small but they could still see the tip shown from the cups KITTY Stop using your powers to make me horny JEAN Who says i am? Your doing it on your own KITTY Stop lying JEAN You only lie to yourself, but...your body... Jean puts her right index finger on kitty's boob and starts to lower slowly through her chest and her sweat Kitty follows the path of jean's finger with her eyes gasping with more heavy breathings JEAN ...(giggles) your body... shows me... Jane's finger is on her belly, she begins to lower, plays with the waistband a little bit and stops at the center of her panties JEAN (Whispers) The truth... Kitty looks at her panties and to her surprise her pussy is totally wet, her stain is quite visible from a far. Kitty is so embarrassed to be exposed in front of someone else involuntarily and she doesn't admit that she likes it KITTY Don't...tell...anybody Jean giggles, she gets in her knees and proceed to ask JEAN Have you been masturbated by telekinesis? KITTY ...no...and don't even... JEAN Shhhh...don't be afraid my dear, it feels weird at first but...then it feels just like an extra pair of hands KITTY Pair of...Hands? Jean then focuses on kitty's pussy and her pussy starts to rub itself Kitty is loitering at the door and sees this magic while seeing Jane smile at her accomplishments. She opens her mouth gasping for air. JEAN That was a warm up...Now for the fun part. Jane puts more power into her mind and Kate's pussy. Kate begins to cross her eyes, really silly but she can't control it she is enjoying the ride. After some minutes Jane stops. JEAN Now...listen closely Kate is trying to find her balance JEAN How cute...now, i manage to control your climax at the top, one more touch and you will cum an ocean. Even the slightest touch will provoke it KITTY I...i''m...not gonna...cum Jane smiles knowing she can't fight back JEAN You think you're tough Jane starts to get near Kate, slowly moving forward while on her knees Kate watches in suspense, sweating and trying to concentrate on not having a load in front of her, but she can't focus Jane looks at Kate in the eyes striking fear and making her shake. She then looks at her panties directly and notices the strings JEAN Oh my...you are really asking for it KITTY Wha-what do you mean? JEAN Panties with strings are the easiest ones to take off KITTY No...don't... Jean bites her lips JEAN Is it bushy down there? KITTY Tha-That's private JEAN Until now... Kate looks at her panties and the strings from the left side started to move on their own, untying themselves and the last loop was undone it rested on the side of her panties. KITTY Ah!! Kate reacts of fear to show her 'kitty' exposed. JEAN What's wrong kitty...cat caught your tongue Jean does a slow sexual taunt with her tongue. Kate opens her eyes wide since she knows that Jane's tongue will meet her pussy down there jean KITTY I beg... Jane looks at kitty's bra which a B-cup and suddenly her left bra strap broke,and kitty looks at her left shoulder then her right bra strap breaks and she looks at her right shoulder. Kate looks at jean's face. Showing her true intentions Kate feels her bra is getting unhooked by itself so she uses both of her hands to reach for the hook JEAN So predictable... Jane does a finger twist to open the bra from the front and it flew rapidly across the room Kate's B-cups bounces with her fully erect, light pink nipples JEAN So pointy Kate let's out a gasp and covers her chest Jane continues to undress the final piece of clothing JEAN Now...for the grand finale Kate looks at her panties right string, the only one that's holding it together The strings are pulled gently making it more erotic. Kate bites her lips. The strings undo the last loop and then her panties hits the ground JEAN Oh wow...clean baby shave Kitty's pussy was white and pink with minor hair but still arousing to look at Jane's face touches Kate's vagina takes out her tongue and eat her pussy. Savoring it like it's the last meal on earth. Kitty's red face and her crosses eyes affirmed that she just lost and to her surprise the came a lot The floor was drooling with her fluids, her legs were shaking and the milk was running between her legs Jane giggles after kitty's defeat. She didn't mind to get dirty with cum in her face, mouth and hair. Kate is breathing heavy, she is really tired no one has ever made her cum like that she has never felt so horny in her entire life. she was resting on the door but suddenly her powers came back and she trespassed the door. Kate falls to the hallway she tries to get up and when she turns around she sees him... professor X She can't believe she is actually naked in front of him, she is so embarrassed that she feels her body heat and starts to stutter PROFESSOR X Kate? KITTY Pro-pro-profe...sor... Kitty's embarrassment and her powerful load made her faint in front of him She still remembers the incident and tries to not look at Jane in the eyes. But Jane smiles at her and from time to time she undo one or 2 buttons. |
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Fisrt story feedback
Hi guys
This is my first time writting enf I want to make enf content from ghost, magic & telekinesis since i don't see much ofit in the site Please let me know if it good or not What should i write next I will do any suggetion just so get some creative work done And if there some works i should see send me a link to it Please and thank you |
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I liked it. Please use quotations when characters speak. It makes it much easier to read. You should write one where a teacher or something is tied naked spread-eagle on stage
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Question
Your characters are Kitty 'Shadow Cat' Pryde and Jean 'Marvel Girl' Grey.
Why do their names keep switching to Kate and Jane? Is it an autocorrect thing? A couple spelling errors I can understand. But I went through and counted and their names are switched nearly THIRTY times. One of which is in the title! I'm not saying this to be mean but I feel like more effort should have been put into proofreading this before posting. The fact that you - the author - don't seem to care enough to get your characters' names right set a bad tone for your readers. But that's just the opinion of one nerd on the internet. Take the advice however you wish. |
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I agree with the the comments above. You have some very good ideas and descriptions, but the format you chose to present them is confusing. I had to re-read several passages to determine if I was reading a quote by one of the characters or a descriptive passage. The changing names is really confusing. I would suggest , in your next work, that you use standard punctuation and formatting. Makes you story much more readable. Please don't be discouraged by these comments. I think you have much potential and I'd like to see more of your ideas.
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Thanks for the creative feedback
I shall make better use of grammar I will make better content in the future Thank you very very much |
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enf magic, horny, lesbian.girl on girl, stripped naked, telekinesis |
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