WWE enters the ayslum

[tnawwestories]

Stephanie McMahon is stood on the stage looking out to crowd with a mic "welcome to Monday night raw, tonight is going to be special because tonight its viewers choice. so tonight i'm going to leave it down to you the fans to decide the matches and the type of matches! so lets see what you can come up with.
(Stephanie walks off and we go to a break)

1st match is Charlotte vs Dana brooke
2nd match is Beth Phoenix & Natalya vs Kelly Kelly and ???
the main event is for the divas championship sasha bank vs paige

let me know in the comments what type of match you and who will be Kelly kellys partner

[Leeboy420]

Bra and panties match for Sasha and Paige. To team with Kelly Kelly, maybe Eve Torres or Melina?

[Dayjib]

How extreme are we talking here with the matches? Like mild humiliation or more extreme?

Anyway the matches

Match 1 should be a Bra & Panties match

Match 2 should be a stinkface match with Kaitlyn as KK partner

Match 3 should either be a buck naked strip match (with thr stipulation that the loser also gets spanked) OR if you are going more extreme, a submissive match (a submission match where the loser becomes the winners sex slave for the night, including some action in the ring)

[hanskumoekk]

I'd suggest the Sasha Banks vs Paige is a bra and panties match, but one of them ends up naked anyways because of the opponent who has some further plans than just stripping the other to her underwear.

[tnawwestories]

okay then match 1 will be a bra and panties match
match 2 Kelly Kelly and Kaitlyn in a tag team leather and lace match
and finally match 3 will be a submission match

there will be some extreme moments of humiliations as well as it leading to a formation of a new group
does it sound good ?
drop a comment with any ideas you want to see

[smjimmie1348]

Wow new story it's been a while I like the matches you put up as for match types .

1) Charlotte vs Dana Brooke - street fight w/ some minor attempts at strippings because both are heels and dominant so to see which one is the best has to be in a street fight .

2) for Kelly's tag team partner I would say either Maria or Brooke and as for the match type has to be a double evening gown elimination match .

3) and for the main event between Sasha and Paige I agree 100% on the post about it being a bra and panties match then one of them trying to or succeed in going forward w/ more strippings .

Anyway I'm interested in this story so I can't wait to see how it turns out .

[Dayjib]

Not sure how it fits in to your general idea of the story, but I would personally like to see Paige get a spanking over thong/bare. I mean if that's ok to suggest, put what you want in it's your story and I'm super excited for it

[tnawwestories]

Ok here goes my first attempt let me know what you think, this is just a draft

We're back from break and both charlotte and Dana are in the ring time for the introduction from jojo
the following contest is a bra and panties match between Charlotte and Dana

the ref rings the bell and the match begins

charlotte walks up to Dana as both divas start talking trash to each other then outta no where Dana slaps charlotte round the face so hard it leaves a perfect red hand print. charlotte is stunned by this and Dana takes advantage of this by grabbing charlotte in a headlock and plants her with a jumping ddt charlotte rolls out of the ring to regain her composure.

Dana goes out to continue dominating Charlotte, but charlotte counters with a kick to Dana's gut then charlotte throws Dana into the ring barrier and the ring post, charlotte throws her back in and strips Dana of her top revealing a black lace bra holding her DD breasts in ( I don't know if that is correct).

humiliated by this Dana releases her fury on charlotte with a vicious clothesline then picking her up and throwing her into ring post through the middle rope. with charlotte still in the corner ring post Dana rips Charlotte's pants right off her body revealing a gold thong. we go to break

back from break

Charlotte has recovered and now is standing facing Dana both divas are at a stalemate the lights go out for about 10 seconds they then come back on showing Layla stood in the ring between the two divas it looks like she is going to attack Dana until she KOs Charlotte with a brass knuckle. then both Layla and Dana begin to strip a knocked out charlotte and they succeed.

here is your winner Dana Brooks

[tnawwestories]

so what do people think of my first draft

[MKDude]

Rough. I wasn't expecting much from someone who misspelled the title of their story, but your grammar is painful. It also was noticeably short and terribly paced, but you did say this is a draft, so...

Still, the grammar is really bad, and is a glaring area you need to improve.