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I don't think so. Other than a handful of awkwardly structured parts and a few tiny grammatical slips, it seems pretty close to perfect structurally. As to content, I put it at your best story so far.
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I agree, it's certainly up to your usual (high) standard. I've never really been into erotic stories and I used to ignore this part of the forum, but yours have introduced me to them. I have since found more that I enjoy, so thanks for inspiring me Chasmo. Could you recommend a good site for similar ones to your own?
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Thanks for your kind words and genuinely happy that my stories have provided you with an opportunity to enjoy the ENF genre. As far as recommendations go, take a look at the great thread started by amf85 earlier today entitled "My Hall of Fame." He hits on some truly top drawer sites and authors whose writings I'm sure you'll enjoy. My personal favorite is obo but all of them are fantastic and Gao's art is to me the best of breed!
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Another great job, 3 public strippings and 2 spankings in 1 story, what more could you want. 1 observation. Danielle is such a strong arrogant person, I would like to see her keep that arrogance a little longer during her humiliation. Thanks again for the continuing escapades of Danielle Parnell.
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Many thanks
Thanks to all for the kind words. I hope to resume writing soon. PM me with suggestions. Keep in mind that I'm not very interested in teens or male stripping in my work. Just not my cup of tea.
Chasmo, your work is phenomenal! Please continue to create more works. I look forward to every new chapter. obo |
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Certainly hope Chasmo has not disappeared, his stories were first rate.
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