Birth of a crazy chick episode 1

[smjimmie1348]

Yea if you want but there's only one part between Brie and kelly right now you know what I will do both what was part 1 of the Brie vs kelly fued

[dylandartz]

Strip till naked

[dylandartz]

Name the saga whatever

[smjimmie1348]

Ok part 1 is typed and reviewed
And the strip till naked match is typed and reviewed

[MKDude]

I'm just going to ask bluntly. Is English your first language? Your continuous errors are of those even a ten year old is taught not to make, and even with tutoring you don't improve. By all means if English is not your native tongue I give you props for trying to write, but if you were born and raised in an English country, these issues are just depressingly bad.

[smjimmie1348]

What are you talking about just because I post different than in my stories then I do when I post stuff like this and I have improved on the stories I have typed on my phone that I am currently writing on paper as of right now

[dylandartz]

Jimmie yes English is my language this just preview of how good Of story i can do next chapter will be better but I not posting, till u post something of Brie vs Kelly

[smjimmie1348]

Just start on it and I will try and post it tommorrow or tommorrow night