Birth of a crazy chick episode 1

[DrVillian]

Okay i'll reply to this the truth is you are not very good at writing stories there is no punctuation, it is rushed and to be honest the idea is okay but you just don't have the skills right now to perfect it. I'm just going to say this to you keep trying your best but if nobody replies don't spam it in other peoples threads, cause that ain't cool people work hard for there stories to be great and don't want people promoting there stories on his thread.

[smjimmie1348]

I have some punctuation and I'm at least trying usually I would just sit and wait for others to do one like it or a request from me so yeah and I understand what u are saying about the hard work I know because I put hard work in my stories as well and I'm sry 1993wwe for doing that I truly am and I hope u can forgive me

[hanskumoekk]

Originally Posted by smjimmie1348

I have some punctuation and I'm at least trying usually I would just sit and wait for others to do one like it or a request from me so yeah and I understand what u are saying about the hard work I know because I put hard work in my stories as well and I'm sry 1993wwe for doing that I truly am and I hope u can forgive me

It's hard for us to believe that you're working hard on improving your writing and punctuation, when your responses are completely stripped of any kind of punctuation. You got to start somewhere. Start with the general language when you write anything, or else you'll be stuck forever in no-punctuation land. The lack of punctuation leads to all around poor writing, not only in your stories, but in your other posts as well. It's hard to understand what you're trying to say. This is the best tip I can give you.

[1993wwe]

Originally Posted by smjimmie1348

I have some punctuation and I'm at least trying usually I would just sit and wait for others to do one like it or a request from me so yeah and I understand what u are saying about the hard work I know because I put hard work in my stories as well and I'm sry 1993wwe for doing that I truly am and I hope u can forgive me

Lol, yeah its no big deal. Don't worry about it.

[smjimmie1348]

Part 3 has been typed and reviewed halfway done with writing it on paper

And

Part 4 has been typed and reviewed and about to start writing it on paper

[jimmythehand]

Originally Posted by smjimmie1348

Part 3 has been typed and reviewed halfway done with writing it on paper

And

Part 4 has been typed and reviewed and about to start writing it on paper

Perhaps I've missed something here, in which case I apologise, but why do you need to write it on paper before you post it if it's already typed and ready to go?

[DrVillian]

Originally Posted by jimmythehand

Perhaps I've missed something here, in which case I apologise, but why do you need to write it on paper before you post it if it's already typed and ready to go?

haha couldn't agree more

[smjimmie1348]

I type on a notepad on my phone then I review it then I write it on paper then I write what was on the paper on to here since I can't copy and paste

[jimmythehand]

Originally Posted by smjimmie1348

I type on a notepad on my phone then I review it then I write it on paper then I write what was on the paper on to here since I can't copy and paste

I see, assuming you can't keep it on the computer and so can't simply type it on there and then copy and paste it on to here, why can't you just type what's on your phone straight on to here, rather than writing it out on paper first, or just write it on paper in the first place? If you're saying you need to do a first draft, then a second draft, then type it up, then why not write both drafts on paper, since that has to be easier than typing a story on your phone?

[smjimmie1348]

The paper is for me too when I decide to post something I post what is on the paper so I can remember all of what I did on there if I did it your way I would forget and mess up so I'm just trying to help you out