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Old 12-22-2013, 04:25 AM
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I started out loving this series, but for me it's kind of fizzled out. There are simply too many characters and too many story arcs now. And in most of them very little happens. I thought this was supposed to be an ENF story, but in the vast majority of entries there's no ENF at all. I'd have preferred you to stick with Noelle's journey alone, to be honest. The other characters I really can't get into.
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Old 12-22-2013, 06:09 AM
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Well i'm sorry you feel that way. To be honest writing was just something i did for fun in my spare time, honestly it is hard to write here and there as i'm just writing what comes to mind. Though if you honestly want more focus on Noelle i don't mind putting a larger focus on her, one of my struggles when writing was lack of criticisms so I thank you for the assistance
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Old 12-22-2013, 11:52 AM
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Well i'm sorry you feel that way. To be honest writing was just something i did for fun in my spare time, honestly it is hard to write here and there as i'm just writing what comes to mind. Though if you honestly want more focus on Noelle i don't mind putting a larger focus on her, one of my struggles when writing was lack of criticisms so I thank you for the assistance
I appreciate the fact you update your stories so much, but I think you'd get a better response if you posted higher quality stories less often. I think most people who come here are here for ENF content, and at times the daily editions don't provide that.

Even just shoving some smaller editions together into long ones and posting every few days would be more fulfilling.
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Old 12-22-2013, 12:28 PM
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Okay maybe i'll do that, i'll start going back to my schedule and try for larger updates like it was at the beginning. So i hope you keep reading and at least see if it improves to your standards at all
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Old 12-22-2013, 01:29 PM
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I feel the opposite, I love the side stories!
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Old 01-17-2014, 07:05 PM
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Hey guys sorry for not having written for so long, I just wanted to give you lot an update on recent events. Now just to clarify the story hasn't been cancelled or ditched (neither have my other stories) but I just haven't had the free time. This is because my job's Christmas bonus wasn't as much of a bonus as I'd thought (and was told) and money got a bit tight. (You know how Christmas is for cash) I have mostly been trying to work it off and have had little time to write.
So in conclusion I will be writing but not until around the 25th of Jan as that should be when I can finally be free of this unfortunate money problem.
Thank you for listening!
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I think it's disappointing that this story has ceased. Hoping you come back dog!
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Old 09-03-2014, 10:07 AM
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Hey I agree but u know they always say all good things must come to a end and it looks like this has I hope u are ok and come back to even say hello if not it was nice knowing u fld
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