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Originally Posted by smjimmie1348
Good story and great build to it , but the stripping was not there , and her eating hay is different , but you probably could do better
What I am saying is how you said two minutes after she lost Sasha was naked .
You should have let Emma strip Sasha of her top or shorts during the match , then strip the other half after the match .
But , I did like how Sasha tapped to her own finisher that was good that has rarely been done , in real life or in stories .
What would part 2 be if you don’t mind me asking ?
Maybe Bayley tries to save her friend .
Maybe Emma gets a interview with a certain Renee Young , and things get heated .
Maybe Emma can try and become absolute .
Maybe Emma can prove she’s the wicked witch of the wwe .
Or , maybe Emma can prove that there is someone ready for asuka
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Thanks for the comment and criticism! I do agree, the stripping of Sasha is rather 'shoehorned' in, really. It was more about the humiliation beforehand. But, I will try and work on that, I get what you're sayin'.
I don't mind at all! Yes, the plan for pt. 2 is Bayley, definately. After her... I'm not so sure. She's definately coming for Alexa's title, I can tell you that much, haha.
(Asuka is my fave, so it's pretty likely Emma will find her
Paige too)