Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Will’s Mom Comes Undone
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Old 10-29-2017, 02:29 PM
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I'm not a huge fan of the runner's build type, but that was so great I honestly didn't care.

This was much shorter than your other recent stories, but the build up, pacing, detail, etc. worked great. Plus, since it's all published at once, instant gratification!
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