Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Will’s Mom Comes Undone
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Old 12-24-2015, 11:39 AM
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Default A little feedback

Love your writing. Your build up is great, but I feeling the stripping humiliation part could longer. Also, things of than a brief spanking would be nice, live WAM and/or tickling. Pantyfilling with pies, etc. would be outstanding. Just a little feedback and suggestions from a fan of your work.
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