Very nice story! Loved the details of clothes and jewelry, I think they are indispensable when one describes such types of women, snooty and vain. But please, a little bit more description of what's going on in poor Danielle's head during the moments of her predicament... would be great to see her downfall from the inside.
As for the story of Mrs Parnell and her partner, that would be awesome. I love tales about some couple's humiliation, especially haughty, rich and narcissistic couples. But actually they are very rare and yours would be refreshing.
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