Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] A nightmare on Enf street
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Old 07-31-2012, 05:22 AM
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Very nice, a surprisingly good idea for an enf story and particularly liked how the ending unfolded. Use of paragraphs might make it easier to read though
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