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Old 10-02-2014, 10:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Dayjib View Post

One thing you did touch on, the match length. I know you weren't knocking it, but that was one thing I was concerned about; is it long enough. Maybe I'm just a perfectionist in a way. I dunno.
The length was fine... (well that's clearly an innuendo). It may have been a little short but it worked perfectly... (I'm gonna stop now). This is only the first chapter. The first match of the story doesn't need to be a long and drawn out Match of the Year Candidate. You accomplished everything you needed to. You established both of your characters and their mindsets and you inflicted enough punishment on Bayley that it was believable that she couldn't fight back when Sasha was stripping her. Plus, it kind of fit Sasha's style. I'm not knocking her but I don't feel like she's quite on Paige or Charlotte's level. Its not the size, its how you use it. You used it perfectly...(I'm not apologizing for that one).
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