Thank you Mick, glad to have helped out with your day. Personally, I'm enjoying writing these stories a lot more than I thought I would and I'm really pleasantly surprised to see just how much the experienced writers on this site are enjoying the chapters and giving helpful suggestions to improve it.
Definitely agree about the colors. Didn't think that one through when I first assigned Magenta to Paige but I wasn't sure whether to fix it or just deal with the choice I made. I think it makes sense to switch, so probably starting next chapter Paige will be Purple.
And smjimmie, if you want to write a story of your own, I think a lot of us would be interested in reading it. The grammar may not be perfect but I'm pretty sure people would prefer a good story with some slight grammar issues and a few punctuation mistakes rather than no story at all.
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